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Minecraft Account Name: IAmJoke
Please define what Roleplay is in your own words: When you act out a character as if you are that character. You usually make these characters as so you have to act as if you are that character.
Please define what Metagaming is in your own words: Knowing something you shouldnt irp
Please define what Powergaming is in your own words: A extremely strong thing usually in roleplay where it can barely be defeated most the time cant be defeated. A good example being maybe a sword that cant be broken but can one shot anything
n your own words, please give a brief description of what Cyberpunk is: A slummy sub genre of sci-fi
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Character Name: Collossus-9
Race: Android
Planet of Origin: Kepler
Spoken Languages (Must be pertinent to planet of origin): Russian English Japanease
Date of Birth (Current year is 2108): The birth of his frame is 2108 the A.I was made in a unknown time
Gender: Android
Height: 7'10
Appearance description (describe outfit, hair, eyes etc - 1 paragraph minimum requirement): He looks like a man in a grey space suit he also has a orange screen. He has what seems to be a GUI on his screen at all times. He is always scanning his enviroment. As he is a KMC built robot his frame is military aswell as his core.
Occupation: ASEC Intelligence Android
Personality: Cold anger fury and many other but those 2 are his favorite he has the personality of a teenager as a android
Personal History:He was built by the KMC to be a intelligence android. During a battle he was then in a battle where he was then injured and shut down he then was found by a ASEC engineer. originally used as scrap what basically happened to him is that like the ship paradox where the ship is used for scrap and a brand new ship is made out of its parts and its kinda the same ship is what happened to him. ASEC then proceeded to use the android with the parts that werent broken. He was then used as intelligence android only a month later was he then used as a combat android. He is mostly not very talkative but can be if you peak his interest.
Medical Conditions/Disabilities: Anxiety Anger management
Goals: To learn as much as the android can
ACCEPTED
congratulations! Your character has been accepted to the frontier! Happy RP!
~Sigma
PENDING
Hello! So looking over this character, I have to say that it needs some polishing, otherwise it will be denied.
Let's start off with the OOC section. Just because this is your second character, does not mean you get to give crappy answers. Please spell-check / grammar-check your definition of Roleplaying, and give a better definition of Powergaming. Your IC section looks only a little better, but better nonetheless.
- Please state what languages Collossus knows specifically. We ask for this to keep a record so that players can't just BS their way into saying that they know all languages.
- The year is 2108, not 20108.
- Please restate your goals so that your character is not going in blind. If his goal is to find a purpous in life, then that is fine- however it sounds kind of shaky if you say that your goal is to find a goal (which basically means that you have none to begin with).
- Lastly, I am the resident KMC expert of the server (I built the freaking thing) so I take issue with the following: The KMC holds a very basic contract with ASEC. They do not make things simply to give to other people, and they would not just make a combat android to give away. So you need to do one of two things: either scrap this backstory and come up with a new one -OR- give your current backstory more depth to describe in a better fashion how Collossus ended up with ASEC.
Overall: needs some work, but has potential to be a cool character. Please re-read after all edits are made to ensure you are saying what you want to say. Thanks for your time, ~Sigma