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Character Name: Riddle
(Optional) Character Art (Post images/concept art of your character!):
Race: (Human, Android, Cyborg)
Cyborg
Planet of Origin (Earth, Mars, Saturn, Kepler or Kuiper. Other planets are allowed if they are written well and correctly in your history):
Kepler
Spoken Languages (Must be pertinent to planet of origin): English
Date of Birth (Current year is 2108): Born in 2090 (19 years of age)
Gender: Female
Height: 5'9
Appearance description (describe outfit, hair, eyes etc - 1 paragraph minimum requirement):
Riddle is a young woman who normally would appear to be a human, but she'd be a cyborg, having a metal arm as her enhancement. She'd have long brown hair that would normally be tied up in a messy bun, but when it's not, it'd reach her lower back. She'd have a beautiful curvy figure that's normally hidden underneath her black long sleeved shirt with a leather jacket, wearing regular navy blue pants tucked into her black boots. She'd also keep her dark brown gloves on to hide most her skin. The only part of her that would be revealed would be her neck, which would show her skin tone to be white, her hair clearly on the verge of falling out of her messy bun, but it'd somehow mostly stay in place.
Occupation: (What profession do they have? Can be related to their Title)
Mechanic
Personality: (At least a paragraph is preferred)
Riddle is a mysterious young woman. She tends to keep to herself, eavesdrop and not say much. She frequently keeps her body hidden, and typically isn’t one for romance. She has more of a blank expression that she keeps mainly. She rarely smiles or says more than a few sentences to people. Though the more she talks, the more she’s interested in whoever she’s speaking to.
Personal History: (The backstory of your character. Explain how your character ended up on the Frontier. 2 paragraph minimum requirement)
Viviarin Aerin was born into a poor family on the planet Kepler. As she grew up she was treated roughly, earning her many marks on her skin that she normally hides under thick clothing, not caring if she feels hot. She had three other sisters. Adreli, who is about one year older than Viviarin, Mesia, who is one and a half years older than Viviarin, and Avash, who is about four years older than Viviarin.
Around her seventh birthday, her family became much more desperate than they ever had been in terms of money, so they sent Viviarin, Adrelei, Mesia, and Avash out to get as much money, food, and supplies as they could. They each sighed and Avash dragged them all with her, making it look like a normal family walk with the young girls. Once they reached the market full of crowded streets, they seperated and each went to steal from a different area of the market.
Adrelei ran towards the food, taking a piece of bread immediately and walking with it, doing so a few times before she hid from sight. Avash went towards the drink, talking to the owners to distract them while Mesia took out as big of a barrel of water as she could find. Viviarian on the other hand, just stared at the bits of metal and watching the mechanics with curiosity. She didn’t steal anything, and Andrelei noticed this, calling over to Viviarian. This however, got the attention of many around her. Many shouted “Thief! Get her!” as many ran towards her. Panicked, Andrelei ran over to Viviarian and pushed the bread in her hands and arms, disappearing into the crowd as many then surrounded Viviarian.
They tackled her and gave the dirty bread back to the merchant. They held her down as she cried and screamed, “It wasn’t me, please!” “Shut up stupid girl! You’re going into the brig!” The guards now took over and brought her to the brig of the city, which was dirty beyond belief. There were many other thiefs there also awaiting punishment for their crime, and they stared at Viviarian with hungry eyes, seeing her smooth skin and the little meat on her bones. She was then thrown into the brig filled with rats, spiders, roaches, and dirt. She’d shiver as the coldness of the metal floors and walls touched her skin.
For a few days Viviarin sat there, clutching her stomach as she threw up stomach acid many times because they barely fed her. “Get up girl, we’re deciding what to do with you.” Viviarin would somehow manage to get up, her arm being grabbed by one of the guards as they led her into a room filled with people in suits and fancy dresses. She didn’t listen to anything they said, as someone who looked like a mechanic was in the room. She’d instead be looking at him, before that man who spoke up, “How about she spends a month doing my work as.. Community service?” Slowly everyone agreed, and Viviarin would’ve been shoved towards the man with a gasp. The man would’ve kneeled in front of Viviarin and looked into her eyes. “So, Riddle, you’re my apprentice now. Let’s get to work.” He’d say in a stern voice, Viviarin looking confused, “That’s.. Not my name…” The man would smirk a little, looking her scrawny body up and down, “You’re right, it’s your earned name.” Without giving her time to respond, he’d stand and grab her closest shoulder with a firm grip, before leading her to his shop.
He’d finally release his shoulder once they both were inside, locking the door behind him. “You’ll sleep on the couch in the same room as me, understand?” The girl simply nodded, too nervous to say anything. For the next month she spent the entirety of her time in the man’s mechanic shop, very quickly enjoying this work. On her last day, however, she was given a sleeveless black shirt, black pants, and black boots. “You seem to be enjoying your time here, Riddle. If you ever want to come back and learn more, wear that when you do” The man would say with a grin to her, giving her a light pat on the back. “Thank you Sir… Actually, before I go.. What’s your name?” She’d ask, smiling up at him a little bit. “Sensos, but my earned name is Pathfinder”
Sensos soon sent the girl off home, which is what she was dreading the most. As she opened the door to their nearly broken down home, her sisters would run up to her, each hugging her as they smiled widely. “Is that bitch back yet?” Yelled her mother from upstairs. She wouldn’t get a response, which caused her to storm down the stairs, grinning as she saw how scared all of her daughters were. Her grin would only widen as Riddle stepped up, kneeling in front of her. “Yes Ma’am… I’m here..”
Riddle’s screams could be heard all throughout the poor people’s homes as she was continuously beat by her mother. During that time, her left arm got cut off from the shoulder. She’d scream even louder as this happened, and blacked out. When she woke up, she was in a hospital. As she opened her eyes, she’d squint at the sudden bright light, groaning as she felt a great amount of pain on her left side. When she looked over, she’d see that she had no arm, and began out freak out before Pathfinder walked in with a smile, “Hey, hey, it’s okay Riddle. Calm down, you’re safe.”
Pathfinder then took Riddle into his care, teaching her the ways of being a mechanic and how to properly steal things such as food, money, and metals. On her seventeenth birthday Pathfinder gave Riddle a metal arm, properly welding it into her shoulder so she could use it as her own arm, making her a Cyborg. A few days later she’d be sent out into the world of decisions.
Every day since she was out on her own, she'd pay very close attention to the trade ships that constantly came to and from the planet. A few times she even spoke with some of the traders on there, mentioning her skill as a mechanic and also her wishes to travel. At around the age of nineteen she would've started to get worried, hearing rumors about what was happening to Kepler. This would get her very worried, constantly trying to leave but wouldn't have enough money for it.
Then, on one of the last few trade ships, she'd wait until they were all out, before sneaking onto the ship. Her mechanic nature allowed her to know where the alarms were on the ship, just barely avoiding them. She'd then crawl into the smallest cabinet she could fit herself into, which would only have a few cleaning supplies. The cabinet's length would make up for it's height, as she stayed laying down in completely black clothing, resting only when she knew everyone else was.
A little more than a day later, she'd feel the ship land on a world unknown to her. After she heard no more footsteps on the ship, she'd slowly and quietly crawl out of the cabinet, making her way to the rooms of the ship which would likely be empty, knocking on the doors and not going into the ones that responded. For the rooms she did go into, she'd take as many items of interest from them as possible, making sure to move pretty fast, picking up a few tools here and there before leaving the ship as quickly and as quietly as possible.
Once she did so, she'd quickly make her way towards the inner city, telling other people who asked her which ship she was a part of that she was lost, and just wanted to go back into the city. She'd manage to do so but with some concern, making sure to leave before any members of authority came. She'd end up in Reiltulok on the planet Salvus with only a few more tools and some beautiful golden necklaces and bracelets in her satchel.
(Optional) Criminal History: (What crimes has your character been convicted of, or perpetrated, in the past?- If applicable)
Accused stealing, but the case was dropped because she was a young girl and she was accused of attempting to steal a small bit of coin and bread for her family
Medical Conditions/Disabilities: (Remember, almost every character has a flaw. Be realistic!)
Riddle has paranoid schizophrenia and anxiety. She also has a metal arm, which makes her a cyborg.
Goals: What does your character seek out of this new life.
Riddle seeks out as much money as she can so she can travel around places and find her living family
(Optional) Relationships: (Entirely optional, you may list character relations with others)
She treasures the relationships with all of her sisters, and she especially keeps Pathfinder known in her heart as the father she never had.
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Your app is pretty good, except there were a couple things I noticed.
1. You said the year she was born in was 1089, an easy fix.
2. Kepler is sort of a pile of ash in space right now, so you might have to tell about the way you made it to Salvus, as that's where Reiltulok is currently.
-Reilious
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