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Minecraft Account Name: ArcDefender
Please define what Roleplay is in your own words:
Taking the likeliness of a desired character in a given setting, acting as said character
Please define what Metagaming is in your own words:
Using OOC information and applying it to your character
Please define what Powergaming is in your own words:
Forcing your own actions in roleplay upon others
(Note these are defined on the site, if you need to look through the rule and copy the answers)
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Character Name: Aaron Pax (Codename: Pax-05)
Race: Human
Planet of Origin: Earth
Spoken Languages: English
Date of Birth: May 9th, 2086
Gender: Male
Height: 6'2"
Appearance description: Aaron Pax's true appearance has only been seen by few people. Most describe him as a tall, light tan-skinned individual with black hair and brown eyes. He is often seen wearing his exoskeleton frame which keeps him alive as well as gives him abilities far beyond what normal humans can do such as: enhanced speed, strength, and an assisted jump to reach higher elevated platforms. It also includes advanced systems integrated into it for easy communication and to assist him in battle. His exoskeleton is dark gray to keep a low profile but can be spotted due to the internal systems and lighting underneath being somewhat exposed.
Occupation: Soldier
Personality: Knowing nothing but intense training all of his life, Aaron Pax is a force not to be reckoned with. He is a master in the art of stealth and an excellent tactician and strategist. When he isn't on duty, he is known to have the utmost respect and is even empathetic. He is loyal but will never blindly follow orders unless he knows what he is getting himself into.
Personal History: Born and raised in Los Angeles, California, Aaron Pax grew up in a poor family knowing nothing but intense training, his dad wanting him to be the first line of defense for the Space Marines. At the age of 18, he entered the Space Marines and was deployed on many missions. When he returned back to Earth, he discovered his family perished because of the condition Earth was in and the inability to travel to a safer planet due to financial struggle, which motivated him to fight even harder and to help humanity as much as he possibly could by protecting them from the outside, hostile forces.
While still on Earth, he was called to fight and was an excellent soldier. The war he was called for was a war for resources, as they were limited at the time. Aaron held back many hostile forces as the rest of the Marines gathered the resources and loaded them on a cargo. There wasn't enough time and too many hostiles were invading as they were still gathering the resources, so Aaron decided to stay and be a distraction for the team as they departed back for Earth. The Marines eventually came back, only to find him in critical condition with many sustained injuries, which left him confined to his exoskeleton. Without it, he would simply die.
His current whereabouts are unknown and he prefers to keep it that way, only coming out of the darkness when he is truly needed. He prefers to be called by his code name, Storm, to keep his identity hidden from the outside world.
Criminal History: AWOL; desertion
Medical Conditions/Disabilities: Cybernetic augmentation on right arm from injuries, life-support system and respirator integrated into the exoskeleton
Goals: Peace, Stabilization within society
Relationships: N/A
Pending
It is a bit better than last time, though you forgot to edit the Medical Conditions piece when editing. Other than that, it doesn't sound as OP. However, the colonies in the rp were mostly already set up by the time the war ended, and not many, if any, have been created since. Also, if you include a war in a character app, you must be very descriptive about said war, which you need to work some more on.
-Reilious